Don't upload unfinished tracks
I think it lacked something in the background. Like strings/pads or a bassline with longer notes would work
Don't upload unfinished tracks
I think it lacked something in the background. Like strings/pads or a bassline with longer notes would work
it needed drums
Not sure if like
THose strings got me tired. They keep repeating all through song and they are very powerful. A drop or two would work
Thanks for the feed back. I'd re-work the song, but unfortunately the Laptop i was using died on me. Power cord got fucked. If I can find the same kind of power supply in the future, I might be able to tweak it some more.
Very nice
I will always give 10 for such songs. I don't know if you did but just don't use birds in the background, ever
First off, thanks for review and score! No, I do not even like birds, I used a nexus synth, it kinda resembles birds! lol
Roc A Lot / BBE
It's not complete
What about you complete the song and send me the link then. I have no idea what is this.
I didn't try on this AT ALL...
[o;;O]
Pretty good
Though a solid bassline would make it a complete song. I really feel the need of it :|
yeah i agree. my friend.
Pretty weird
Hmm, the melody was weird. It wasn't bad but I say it was a bit noobish as the instruments were not introduced well enough
Anyway that's just what I think. I give 5 for the efforts though. Good luck
Appreciate it. I try to make unique sounding songs and use different progressions than that of regular techno/trance songs. and this was my first song with Fl studio 9, so i'm still trying to iron out some effect kinks with instruments.
Messy
Pretty good beginning, nice roll in and stuff
The main lead is definitely too loud in places and it doesn't sound well distorted or it is the consequnces of flanger effect. Note when the sound appears scratchy and add limiters (0:20). I think your track doesn't have a real bassline, there is something second lead and it is similar to the first one and is also sawy. I think that what makes it sound kind of "on the top".
I added no limiters, and my volume levels were a little shaky at parts.
Well, Im working to correct it.
Thanks for the great review!
As for bass, yeah, i'v got a LOT of saws combined in this song, a bass would get lost in it. You can bearly even hear my hits. Blahhh
lol
Nice noise. Have you tried to listen to it before uploading?
Well actually no...
When I encoded it it was done faster than expected, and thus gave me a crappy encoding. The entire bass line droped out. It was also really just to put something together, not nessecarily sound good.
But thanks anyway...
Keep up the style
This is the style I like but I can't give 5, song was very simple. Well you can keep it repeatitive but make strong drops/build ups you know what I am saying (:
good luck
yeh i dig wutcha sayin it was just a smooth relaxing chill beat no big drops or nething was needed n they always say the simpler the beat the more catchy it is so i try to work that into my styles but thanks for the constructive criticism i love hearing ideas
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