Not b ad song. I love that blown instrument thing. Not sure how it is called. Reminds me of HOMM.
I am not sure how you compose for that many violins but I would have reduced the attack and release for some of them to make like more powerful staccato hits if you know what I mean. I might be way off commenting on this but I kinda found that most of violin libraries are kinda made for these slow cinematic songs and sometimes they just don't have enough power and sound kind of like pads so you have to tweak it a bit.
Good luck