Not sure if like
This track has potential. I don't like something about the quality of the drums. Maybe you should remove any reverb you aplied for them. Drum composition is kind of complicated. Ofc, it is nice, but it could done better. You used a lot of rolling snares, they were main thing all through the song, I listen for for third time and it feels you kind of abused them or maybe it gets repeatitive(after 1:20). I think you should spend some more time and finish it. Jazz instruments add very nicely, you should come up with an ending