Doesn't sound to my liking.. again
It may sound good on your setup but there was too much high frequency sounds for me. Melody is nice but it is hard to heard through the glitchyiness of the sound. I bet you have multiple channels of drums playing at the same time. I think you tried too hard and to be honest it wasn't enjoyable track but if you changed few stuff it would be alright.
I wouldn't like to tell you to stop using gated synths or your gated limiters or w/e because chances are it will sound much better in your next track because you are trying so hard :| Anyway, focus on sound quality in general